M

You were beautiful,
Once.
I haven't seen you
Since then-
Not in person.

Author's Note

About the first guy I ever loved. I realized I've never written about him before so :/

Reviews

[The 13th Eros]

This hints at those haunted places in memory that arouse the deepest beauty. First love... such a pure ecstasy at the spring of the soul.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very short yet sweet as well.

[Kaylor Mason]

I wonder if "M" has read this or not

[Blue Ivory]

That is such a good question! And no :P It'd be ironically amusing if he did though, and had no clue what he was reading.

[UnderCompulsion]

Nice,short and touching.I like it! :)

[DrD]

At some point we all write aobut our first loves and this writing leaves me with the question whether it is a nostalgia piece or a statement of cold, no longer caring fact. Either way, it's an interesting statement piece.

[Blue Ivory]

It's the first one. I'm saying, I hate how he changed from being an amazing guy to being pathetic, and how my memories of my first love should not be unpleasant. So I choose to hold onto the good times, and ignore the fact that I know what he's turned into. I'm choosing the ending of my own story. It doesn't matter since even though I've seen him on Facebook and heard from him, I technically haven't seen him in person. So I'm not really supposed to know anyway, I guess.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

deeply interesting......made me recall many I once carely deeply for and have not seen in 20 plus years. Well done Poet.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have wonder how the beautiful people looked today from my past?. Beauty is like all things. Can change with time. A good question brought to life in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Leigh]

1st impressions cast long shadows

[amarlaksh]

good thought