Statue For You

Statue For You

A Poem by Blue Ivory

I do believe I was sent here for your comfort
Molded specifically to provide for your needs
My thorax, you see, its missing piece is your head
The heart that beats within
Beats in a pattern that soothes you
I breathe deep and slow
To synchronize it with yours
It's not Sandman that makes your eyelids heavy, you know?

My limbs can hold you
So you don't fall off

I can only rest after you fall asleep

© 2012 Blue Ivory


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I enjoyed the thoughts and the description in the poem. I like the calm feel of the words leading to a peaceful and beautiful ending.
"I can only rest after you fall asleep"
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A poem from a kept woman.............

Posted 10 Years Ago


So beautiful, with deserved feelings and attachment. Also love your count of words. Nicely pened dear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful, and such a devotion to love... a surrender of letting all go of yourself for one and another, really loved this piece.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's always interesting to read a female perspective on love. Gives me the illusion of figuring out women :) Enjoyed reading this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote with his excellent taste has got it right,this is a very good poem, a good idea written with lots of good lines, and what i like is the critical, ironical tone of the message it transports. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate that you like this. This poem means a lot to me.
Keep on writing... Thank you for sharing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sandman has always been an enigma of love. To be the thorax to someone's better half...smile..it just doesn't get much better than that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am out of words,for this one.Great work as always! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue Ivory

12 Years Ago

Awwwwww Thank you!
Wow that is what I call unconditional love... such amazing emotions expressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely write last three lines so striking .

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Blue Ivory
Blue Ivory

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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