Acknowledgement Of Hope

Acknowledgement Of Hope

A Poem by TheKratiMittal
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Everybody has their moments. Beautiful ones and not-so-beautiful ones. Those that count are the ones are which weren't beautiful but YOU made them so.

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Oblivion. Gloom. Anguish.
Mocks. Disgrace. Heartbreaks.
Helplessness. Estrangement. Loneliness.
Tired of the world’s viciousness,
There you stand, in sadness.
Your own actions become incomprehensible,
Your own people act hysterical.
When everything seems obnoxious and enigmatic,
Try and reach behind the chaotic.
For somewhere in the world, a baby smiles,
After many years, a brother and sister reconcile.
A wife is kissed by her husband,
In a war-prone country, peace is finally sanctioned.

Somewhere behind there is,
A ray of hope,
A silver lining,
A concealed comfort,
A blessing in disguise.

Bliss that you fail to see,
Contentment that you fail to feel,
Love which you fail to comprehend,
and optimism which you fail to apprehend.
See beyond the darkest clouds and you see a clear sky,

Reach beyond the false dispositions and you meet a genuine guy.

Think beyond doom and you think of glory,
Rise up,because you have to make your own beautiful story.

The power resides in YOU,

To get up and see,

That every suffering brings the promise of a life,carefree.
That things have their way,
and then,there will be a brighter today.

So, let go off all the expectations,
and rejoice even in the complications.
For light will always overshadow darkness,
and nothing can stop you from happiness!




© 2014 TheKratiMittal


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a poem with great essence and spirit. made me smile. great work here, keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


"off" or perhaps "of"? Both seemingly fit but I am curious.

The lifestyle of - a cup half-full OR half-empty. How we perceive our world depends on just how real that world is and how it interacts and interplays with others' perceptions and realities. Some accept "good" - some expect it, some stare in disbelief, some see nothing at all. A good introspection of your presence.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

It's "of" what I thought because I feel it needs to be acknowledged.
It is quite true that our.. read more
Chris

10 Years Ago

Anytime... you take care.
Wow...This was so beautiful....Just one word Breathtaking..
Just keep writing and give us the chance to read such wonderful pieces..
Love Anahat :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for your appreciation.
Always grateful, Krati :)
nice attempt krati......the opening lines of your poem are just amazing ....

Oblivion. Gloom. Anguish.
Mocks. Disgrace. Heartbreaks.
Helplessness. Estrangement. Loneliness.

a unique way to start your poems...... concept is also good including the meaning ........nice work


Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words:)
Utkarsh Singh

10 Years Ago

ur welcome dear
The message in the poem could be that we can not control other persons and that by realizing that we have the resources to manage our lives in the right direction then that will make us happy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Absolutely Yes!
You have further deepened the message of the poem.
Thank you :)
wow, inspirational poetry. amazing use of words :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
Sterling.. An exemplar of optimism in poetry.


Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you,Akshay :)
"For light will always overshadow darkness,
and nothing can stop you from happiness!"
Not easy to find hope sometimes. I like the story and the positive and hopeful ending above. We must look for the light in the cover of darkness. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much,Sir.
I'm glad you stopped by :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. Your poetry is outstanding.
Poignant, deep and honest write...very strong poetry.


Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you,Amos!
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
Think beyond doom and you think of glory,
Rise up,because you have to make your own
beautiful story.
The power resides in YOU,

A new ray of morning sun.... you are the rising sun. Beautiful poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing :)
Saddam

10 Years Ago

My pleasure dear always...

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