Pangs Of Loneliness

Pangs Of Loneliness

A Poem by TheKratiMittal

A thoughtless feeling inside,
A void waiting to be filled.
Behind all that strong demeanor resides,
A fragile soul who has often been killed.
Someone who craves attention and seeks appreciation.
Truth that finds solace in false pretence,
Truth that wants to come out 'coz it finally makes sense.
Somewhere deep down there is,
A fervent passion to live and not to exist.
A desire of life which is free from its abhorrent twists.
Sad but true,in the end we need to surrender to someone.
And when you find that someone,life's half battle is won.
A human soul which will selflessly love and genuinely understand,
A human soul which will know your inhibitions & insecurities but, still with you, stand. 
A human soul that fathoms all that guilt and regret, gulped down.
A human soul which will comfort and not frown.
Many people with whom we can laugh out loud,
But,we need that one with whom we can cry out loud.
At the moment,I feel broke.
All I can do is hope.
For someone to come along,
So,that I can join in their life's song!

© 2014 TheKratiMittal


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"A human soul which will selflessly love and genuinely understand,
A human soul which will know your inhibitions & insecurities but, still with you, stand.
A human soul that fathoms all that guilt and regret, gulped down.
A human soul which will comfort and not frown."

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You touch upon a reality of life... in ways I feel and understand. There are words I would use to strengthen the thoughtflow, to more define your image of self and societal existence. Perhaps such words come from our own vision of self and may not apply to another's view but I do NOT fault you for their non-use - instead I am applauding you for having me think deep enough to find them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I appreciate the fact that you could see beyond the usual and chose to applaud me.
I am glad a.. read more
Chris

10 Years Ago

Welcome to Writer's Cafe.
TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I love it,here!
Thanks :)
very very nice writing. i have one question for the writer. what is meant by the line 'a fervent passion to live and not to exist.' .. and how does it pertain to the piece. i loved it over all but that line stuck out to me. thanks for sharing.
em.

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you .em for the kind words.
I am always welcome for interpretations.
This line eek.. read more
.Em.

10 Years Ago

I understand now. The juxtaposition of lived and existed. I agree with you very much so. Love it! :-.. read more
TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you love it.
Very Well done Krati...I simply loved the beauty of your words :) Its straight away going to my favorites...
Amazing...Well penned..Cheers!
-Love Anahat :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I am so glad for you liking it.
Thank you so much.
Each positive comment means a lot.
Anahat

10 Years Ago

My pleasure❤
Truth that wants to come out 'coz it finally makes sense.
Somewhere deep down there is,
A fervent passion to live and not to exist.- I agree

I think that is the most beautiful thing in life, to find that. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Yes,it is!
:)
a very well written poem :) :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
This was very elegantly penned, you are going to rock big time in the world of poetry. This piece witness your talent and every single word you wrote...your magic shines!



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I am flattered!
Thank you :)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend
I enjoyed this writing, very heart-felt, deep feeling and longing. Join in their Life's song - liked this part. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
At the moment,I feel broke.
All I can do is hope.
For someone to come along,
So,that I can join in their life's song!

A heart touching verse. It is not little piece of work, it is a cloud of emotions which always came upon us. Very relatable poetry....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The poem described the hope for the all of us.
"For someone to come along,
So,that I can join in their life's song!"
I tell the young folks. Slow and easy. Ensure you found the right one before passing the line of no return. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

I appreciate your concern.
This poem is a very inside-part of me.
Something which I need.. read more
Ardent poem, bringing out longevity beautifully!

Posted 10 Years Ago


TheKratiMittal

10 Years Ago

Thank you,Pragya ;)

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