My Melody

There she is. Roaming through my mind once again. All the time i should've spent. All the obstacles i should've overcome. Instead i let us fade. Cowardicly i let her be, never to return again. Yet her smile still haunts me. How i long to drown in those long black curls. To melt in her embrace. To feel at home again. Her mind is beauty and her beauty is blinding. The ground is not worthy of those delicate toes and she doesnt even know. I am a fool for hurting her and ill pay for the rest of my days. She deserves the sun and stars. I could never come close. Maybe she'll see it wasnt just for me and that she is the only Melody ill sing for all eternity..

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A sad refrain about regret for misdeads. Well penned.

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Thank you John. Much appreciated.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Aly just spotted a typo:
I am a fool for hurting her and ill pay-I am a fool for hurting her and will pay

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Good eye John :) but it was actually supposed to be "I'll pay". Either ways just fine by me.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok

[Azriel]

i enjoyed this, there's a lot of beautiful images and language used here, you do a really great job of the "she" in this... overall a great piece.

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Thank you so much.. i only wish words could describe how truly amazing she is.

[Shivam Murari]

this should come under paragraph.

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Its a poem.

[Shivam Murari]

It was arranged like a para so I thought. By the way, its nice read. ;) :)

[TheGreenestLeaf]

No i dont watch how i arrange as much :p and thank you