Let Me Stay

Left standing in the pouring rain.
Taken from the only place i feel comfortable.
Left crying, wallowing in my own self pity.
Taken from my world, forced to live in reality.
Left thinking there's something wrong with me.
Taken from my happy thoughts, forced to see the pain of my fragile soul.
I am left alone when i need you most.
I am taken away when im actually happy.
My pain is subsided,
My heart is still breaking,
My thoughts are still flowing.

You have left me here alone and taken the one thing i truly need. . . My sanity.

Reviews

[Azriel]

another great piece, so much vivid imagery here, really paints quite a painful and passionate picture...

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Thank you Azriel.. i hate that most of my writing is pretty depressive but theres always a lighter side.

[journaling_thesp]

True true hats to you

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Thank you.

[Shivam Murari]

love and pain are like skin and bone :)

[TheGreenestLeaf]

Unfortunately i couldn't agree more.

[Shivam Murari]

:( that's life