the fal of love

love does it not hurt in the future?

or does it just make us stringer?

your fall for love just makes us hurt

and pain into your life.

the pain of a breakup

can make us stronger and learn

from our mistake in the

people we chose to

be with.  it hurt us some so bad

we end up hurting our selves

learn from your fall

of love. make yourself

stronger.

Reviews

[Daniel Whitaker]

Nice job man, great writing. Why don't you write like that at school?

[anonymous]

Awesome job! There are words of wisdom in this poem. One word of advice would be to watch your spelling. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Jamestown]

Great write and great message! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!