SuperNOVA

A metaphor for sumchin greater.

I am a bright,
Structureless being.
Amidst the night sky's
Infinite scene - of darkness.

As the darkness
Prevails within and around me,
My colorful frame
Flickers more vivid flames.

I burn my canvas,
Like the superheated gases
That light up the Night's
Unending eye.

I am a SUPERNOVA.
A psychedelic experience,
Exploding with different tones -
Imploding are my feelings...

Soon,this darkness will consume
My attractive shine -
I will lose emotion.
I will become less defined.

When I lose all definition,
Blame me not,
For I am a formless figure
Bringing minds to mock!

THINK.

Author's Note

Horses don't bite.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Love all of the "sky" imagery...lends itself to a very real and cosmic feel at the same time. The consuming darkness, the loss of definition, and the formless figures in the night sky that are perhaps more than we imagine them to be. Very metaphorical...

[Sibling]

Haha thanks for the review Sarah,
The sky is after all the unending sea that sees all -
And stars are just dots. Big dots that are consumed by darkness while trying to enlighten it... So these big dots become small,and we are perhaps all as significant as these dots if we shine within ourselves - but we're worse off when we explode.

Oh,the irony :(( I shoulda been a philosopher.

[Pax]

the power of the mind without self-control is just like a super nova that will spread unending darkness, That's what I see in this piece. A powerful darkness that consume a person into brink of losing his/her senses all together. Very expressive.