Free? DOOM.

This is a spokenword selection I just wrote out for your reading pleasure.

Am I free?
Am I free?
Am I FREE?
If so,then what is freedom?

Do I live?
Do I live?
Do I breathe?
Or do I inhale the illusion of air
That entraps me?

While my exhalations are white sighs
Sown by seedless,
Green trees grown to elevate.
My elevated mind is rooted
By the evils that stem
Within those without,

Restraint - who take -
Who expect to be given,
When all that we're given
Is the chance to change
Our living conditions.
So,am I free?
Or am I a slave -

To the protection
Of that which I have gained,
Guarding GOD's blessings
Instead of enjoying them?
But then again,
THEY are the slavemasters.
Ruled by criminal desires
To not equade - but surpass us.

These fiends forcefully take our phones,
as if their calling was to be low-lives.
High-jackers lack the passion
Needed to display their drive -
In a positive way. HIV positive
Rapists take away the lives of helpless ladies
To cover up their despicable deeds.
The demon is imported and made to possess
The unimportant,

Drugs for the teenagers.
Drugs for the bornfrees.
Drugs that have enslaved us,
Rob the bornfrees of their
Idyllic Rainbow Nation.

STUCK in a place with no IDEAls.

Author's Note

Don't Feed the Trolls.

Reviews

[BlahBlahBlah]

A really nice poem! You have a fresh style of writing! It's quite unconventional and I love it!!

[Sibling]

Thank you,

I guess handwriting a coherent paragraph
Then typing it as I say it helps :))

[BlahBlahBlah]

You're welcome!! :)

[BlahBlahBlah]

A really nice poem! You have a fresh style of writing! It's quite unconventional and I love it!!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid poem. Thank you for penning...:)

[Sibling]

Thanks Sami, :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Stuck in a place with no ideals...yep, that line rings true to me. The world is a difficult place; we are constantly navigating against stormy tides. You've captured some good emotion here, and I could see this being a great piece read aloud. Keep writing, my friend!

[Sibling]

Many thanks :))

I got robbed a while back,
So this is just me delayed reaction to that.

[Sibling]

Many thanks :))

I got robbed a while back,
So this is just me delayed reaction to that.
When I grow up I'm gonna move to Denmark or Luxembourg or sumchin :p