Thoughts on a Sunday

Just chill.

The Sun shines bright
On Sunday morning.
No rain clouds in sight,
The birds are rejoicing.
They sing a song of many chirps,
Then fly away.
The silence shows the sound's worth,
The longer that I lay.
I lay down on the grass
In search of rest on its Day.
I fulfill Adam's task
Nature works in Her way.
In my thoughts is introspection,
For God made it so in Supreme Perfection.

Author's Note

Don't Feed the Trolls.

Reviews

[CecilA]

I really like this poem. It speaks of peace, tranquility and appreciation of life. I don't think you need the word 'The' in the fourth line. 'Birds are rejoicing, As they sing a song of many chirps, And then fly away.' Would you consider revising 'The silence shows the sounds worth, The longer I lay.'? Suggestion: 'Silence reveals sound's worth, The longer I lay on the grass.' Then consider: 'In search of rest on its Day, I fulfill Adam's task, As Nature works her way.' Also: 'My thoughts are filled with introspection, Of God's Supreme Creation.' Just ideas for more cohesion. However, what you have written is very good.

[Sibling]

Thanks for the review Wise One :)