Are they right?

Are they right?

A Poem by TheForgotten
"

you tell me

"

Hope was something I thought I could trust

People told me everyone has there goods and bads

but its all just a lie

 

My life isn't good

Nor great

Nor bad

But horrible

 

First i was separated from my siblings

Then i never saw them over eight years

Lost contact with my siblings

 

Parents who went to jail

Who were abusove

Who did not feed there children

Who did so many unforgettable things

That got them into truble

 

I finally get to email my sister

Then she cant talk anymore

No connections at all

Not with my sister nor my brother

 

You tell me

Are people right

Or wrong

Or is it all a lie

© 2009 TheForgotten


Author's Note

TheForgotten
I know its not just me with all the bad luck.. or am i wrong?

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Wow.. so sad and powerful.. the emotions of bad luck surely are felt by many.. maybe not all on your level.. but there surely are other stories similar to this that I have heard in everyday life from the people I have come across. There are many times where I felt unlucky in my life.. but then embrace the strength of my path.. hopefully one day you can reunite with your siblings.. and be stronger! I feel terrible that this could happen to anyone... in this world. Thank you so much for sharing your emotions and part of your story. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


very good, clearly executed and well written :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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