Bloodstained Hands

The world is an ugly, cruel place

But filled with beautiful people

People that are worth fighting for

So with thin but determined muscles

And with an untrained but focused mind

I will fight the evils that plague my friends

But I must be wise

And not become just as wicked as the demons I fight

I will walk the dangerous, violent path

Until with my bloodstained hands, I purge the evil

So that only peace and love reign

Or until my veins run dry

And my flesh grows cold

And my last, dying breath escapes my lips

My soul to rest forever in the Void.

Reviews

[Marie]

You've said it right. How noble to fight to death seemingly unconquerable demons...rather like Don Quixote...

[mariah]

Amazing! very heroic and i found it incredibly relatable. i feel like you just spoke my mind! (to some degree). it was powerful and to the point, and i mean this to the fullest
-mariah

[Ezekiel Silver]

Amazing poem!!! This is truly an inspirational and admiring piece of work! Fantastic job!!!!

[Seanne Tholltree]

wow...watta a heroic thought of you...

So with thin but determined muscles
And with an untrained but determined mind
I will fight the evils that plague my friends

love it

[Secret Lullaby]

this was REALLY good :) great job

[Molly Leanne Jasmer]

This was a very powerful poem that gave me the shivers.. nice job(:

[DearSweetAgony]

This is a very inspirational and powerful write! I couldn't help be to think about my Call Of Duty games as I read.... Maybe I should stop playing video games so much! Lol, but an awesome write nonetheless!

[CHRIS ANDES]

the real problem is when you're a superhero, the greed of the people you're fighting for...nice thoughts

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true in this poem. So much beauty we must fight for. I like the strength in your words. Need to start a wave of people demanding peace and kindness in a world desperate for TLC. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Zachary_James]

Oh my god i LOVE this. This is Amazing, well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!