For full effect, you might have to read this twice.
I am the Angel of Light. I bring warmth and hope when you need me most And sometimes when life is just fine too. I provoke the smiles of friends and strangers Random acts of kindness to show that life is worth living and enjoying. My invisible light called "Joy" Keeps the darkness at bay.
I am the Angel of Darkness. I am the source of your pain and despair. One day, your mind is calm And the next, it is filled with my grief. Will you cry out for salvation?
I am the Guardian Angel. I am the reason why humans thrive. I am that luck, that fortune that keeps you alive Even in the most crucial times. Even without light I will keep you safe from death.
I am the Angel of Death. I am the one you meet when the Guardian Angel fails. The countless millions that I take are all martyrs for something: Nation, honor, duty, money, lust, power, And love.
Us four angels We are nothing alike, But exactly the same. Nobody sees that we are only different faces of one being. A being with godly power, More than light, More than darkness, More than life, More than death. Who could I be then? What god could have such power? I will tell you:
I don't even remember exactly what my train of thought was for this, but I liked the way it turned out. I believe it truly shows the many faces of love. Yes, the perspective shift in the last stanza was intentional.
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WOW!!! I love this, the way you branched off and told about each one and then reunited them at the end. I also really liked the way you wrote this, I'm all about individuality and this shows it. BRAVOOOO!! :D
I absolutely love the way this was written. It makes me feel inspired to write more and more! What I like the most is that in love there is all those four things. My favorite lines in this poem is "We are nothing alike, but exactly the same." I don't know why but it reminds me of a void or something. As I've told you, your writing is amazing. More then amazing. Words cannot even describe it. Please, write more. I would love to read it. Because reading yours gives me a better idea of how to be a writer.
I really like this. It seems to have a certain faith. Also the fact that you (at least through this) seem to have an incredibly strong faith in the power of love. Keep it up. This is defietly a favorite
When you don't really know what your writing about
it usually turns out good.
And in this case it turned out.... PERFECT!
I LOVE the different lines of different kinds of
angels.
EPIC!
Hey guys, I'm Kenneth. I'm 18 years old and I'm the most conflicted person you'll ever meet. Different people know me as a nerd, an emo, a bad a*s, a pervert, and a hopeless romantic.
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