Snowflake 雪片 Haiku

Some things you just have to leave alone or else you'll ruin it. This philosophy can be applied to life too.

雪片

Perfect, special ice
Changed by a warm, caring touch
To boring water

Reviews

[MiidniightSoul]

Ah, that's a really good haiku. Very well and beautifully written. Great imagery.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is very thoughtful~ a seed meditation~ and so very applicable to the natural wonder humans are constantly trying to alter and cage, to own and admire, out of its natural element only realizing afterward how the wonder is lost when the true form of things is altered~

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I like this. Very good. I enjoy that a 'warm caring touch' can ruin something beatiful i know the feeling.