Three simple words

Not my usual style, but I still like it.

I
Who am I?
Just a man
Bound by the laws of nature and society
But I'm also something more
Inside is fathoms of emotion and inspiration
and love.

Love
What is love?
Just another feeling?
No, it's something more
It draws people together like nothing else can
Just like it draws me to you.

You
Who are you?
Just another girl?
No, you are something more
You aren't extremely pretty or popular
But there is something about you
That takes my attention
And refuses to give it back.

Author's Note

I kind of want to change the last stanza, tell me, should I?

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a finely tuned poetic imbued with expressive depths~as for style~ I realy like the way you take the last word in each stanza and rebirth it as the first in the following~ it works perfectly within the framework of emotions being opened~well done~ personally I like the last stanza exactly the way it is~ it wraps the poetic up well in its genuine exploratin~

[Persephone]

Its good. I like the last stanza, its good. =D few words. haha