Three simple words

Not my usual style, but I still like it.

I
Who am I?
Just a man
Bound by the laws of nature and society
But I'm also something more
Inside is fathoms of emotion and inspiration
and love.

Love
What is love?
Just another feeling?
No, it's something more
It draws people together like nothing else can
Just like it draws me to you.

You
Who are you?
Just another girl?
No, you are something more
You aren't extremely pretty or popular
But there is something about you
That takes my attention
And refuses to give it back.

Author's Note

I kind of want to change the last stanza, tell me, should I?

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a finely tuned poetic imbued with expressive depths~as for style~ I realy like the way you take the last word in each stanza and rebirth it as the first in the following~ it works perfectly within the framework of emotions being opened~well done~ personally I like the last stanza exactly the way it is~ it wraps the poetic up well in its genuine exploratin~

[Bridgette's Ink]

I love how you started each paragraph with a bold word and then a qustion to follow.

[shydarkrose101]

wow that would be a good poem for your girlfriend, especially when you want to tell her you love her but dont know how

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

no. i enjoy it. very very good.

[loowzerX]

I think it's perfect the way it is. I like it :)

[Hidden_identity]

No! No! Do not change the last stanza. It is my favorite!

[clairenicole285]

Wow, I love this poem. It seems really heartfelt. I don't think you need to change anything about this piece. Keep it the way it is. (: Good job.

[Solitary Dreamer]

No don't change anyhting it's wonderful

[Ruth]

I quite like the last stanza!
Keeps the tenseness and the fact its not recipricated, powerful!
xx

[c.m.]

Last stanza is good, I agree with the others. Good poem.

[cheeks]

i don't think you should change the last stanze, i think it's good the way it is. i really like this poem.