Someone Special

I could hold my pain in forever
Not that I want to
What I would like is someone
Who has the heart to understand
Someone who I can share some love with
So that I can fill the empty space inside.

Reviews

[Molly Leanne Jasmer]

Rachael is right, it kind of doesn't flow. I like it, but there are no words that rhyme or flow well together. Great job(:

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

Short and sweet :)

[ToxicMelody]

This is completely adorable! It's simple, short, and sweet! Amazing write!

[Rachael]

Along with everyone else, I think it is nice; short and sweet. Something most people can relate to. To me though, it doesn't flow well. Like some punctuation is needed or something.. Your choice, of course.

[Hidden_identity]

Even though it is short it still makes an impact. I love it! I can really relate to it. Nice job!!

[lorynrrr]

this is awesome i love it

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is direct to the point. I like this poem. We have places in a heart and mind that need a gentle caress. I like the total poem. Last lines were a perfect ending to the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kat Plunkett]

Aw :3

[Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan..]

Awww. This short poem speaks your true feelings. And i can understand hwo it's like to be lonely. Eventually love comes heading your way. Trust me. Anways nice pome, and this isn't emo at all. Though it may seem at first but I've written FAR worse emo stuff.