The Only Thing

Some words of wisdom from me.

Life only lasts so long
And after it
It won't matter what college you went to
Or what career you had
Or how "successful" you were.
It won't even matter how strong you were
Or how skilled your hands
Or how smart your brain.
The only thing you take with you to Heaven
Is the love that you gave away.

Author's Note

Don't live your life focusing on things that don't matter. I know I put it very bluntly here, but seriously, what is it that others will remember you for?

Reviews

[Katannaism]

Somehow very deep and piercing. This is an excellent, awe-inspiring piece indeed. I enjoyed reading this very much.

[Angel With a Shotgun]

Very good. Inspiring. Good Job, Keep up the good work!

[Kita Tataki (Emily Conn..]

I really like this one... its very sweet and very true to life as well. The last two lines were very powerful. (:

[Hidden_identity]

This has become one of my favorite poems now. Very simple, but very true.

[Marie Harrison]

You do make a great point in your poem! Great job.

[Gracie-San]

I think I liked this poem because it was very simple, yet very truthful. Good write. :)

[MiidniightSoul]

I like it. Simple but your words speak the truth. Great. ^^

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked it as well. I thought that this was good. Thanks for sharing. :)

[qaralynn]

great write..like it

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. It is the good and kind things we do that will be remembered when we leave this earth. I like the ending. Great wisdom in your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote