Life

I am in pain.

Not the kind you can see, this pain is internally.

I am hurting.

I know it isn't visible but believe me.

I am fucked up.

And not off drugs you see, its life that has simply gotten to me.

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

So stirring and stunning. Yes, sometimes life just takes us by the throat and tries to take us under. But I sense a fighter in you. xo

[Diamond Dunbar]

Yes my mystery. I am a fighter, a survivor and a beast

[Echoes of Eros]

I can hear your fierce beast roaring in every line. xo

[Diamond Dunbar]

Thank you so much for all your kind words

[Curtis.Lenker]

Good work here. I know what its like to be in pain. Great way to sum it up.

[Diamond Dunbar]

Thank you awesome one! I appreciate it!

[Curtis.Lenker]

Your very welcome.

[V]

I think we might all know this feeling. Though some people might be hurting more than others but it is cruel to compare, one can never really get inside someone. It's interesting you mentioned drugs, I think drugs are a way to escape a fucked up life for many people, the problem is drugs make it worse, creating a vicious circle. It's not the drugs or any things that mess with one in the first instance, it's just life (including people, because we're the creators of life)
Life itself is the cause.

[Diamond Dunbar]

Definitely cruel to compare because the feeling is hurtful no matter the size of the problem. And thank you for your thoughts.

[V]

That's what I thought. But people do that unfortunately.

[V]

And you're welcome.

[Writing Angel]

your words inspired this i hope you dont mind...
pain..loss...strife
all things from this fucked up life..
all the laughs and the mocking sounds
its what makes life the hell..
its what makes this life hell bound

[Diamond Dunbar]

Not at all my love, continue

[Writing Angel]

thank you as i hope you may look at my other writing as your is amazing