Do it again

Love my insanity.

Hug my crazy.

Speak to my pain.

Kiss my love.

Do it all again.

Reviews

[V]

Short and expressive lines. Simple but nice and evoking feelings and thoughts. An enjoyable read.

[barleygirl]

This is what we all wish for. We are all a little crazy & in pain sometimes. This is when we feel unlovable, so it's when we most need to be loved. You've said all that, in the briefest way possible.

[Diamond Dunbar]

I love your reviews and writings you're a very inspirational woman!

[barleygirl]

What a sweet surprise to get a million dollar review on my review! *smile*

[B J Hughes]

There is nothing, NOTHING, logical or sane about passion.
If there is, you're doing it wrong!
You nailed it . . . 'nuff said! 100/100

[richieb]

Diamond, This is the language of lovers. Whispers, soft kisses, touching, long looks. No need for Shakesperian speeches. Beautiful writing from the heart. Richie B.

[Echoes of Eros]

There is nothing more beautiful than having someone love our scars and wildness within. When we can stand before our lover naked and unashamed, we feel aroused into the wonder of the world, and you confess this desire so well. xo

[richy]

I'm with this hans but you don't need to make it any longer ex. love my insanity is a good line to repeat in-between each line and end it with do it all again. It'll give your thought more rhythm.

[Diamond Dunbar]

It's meant to be short and only give a glimpse to make the reader read it again and again until suddenly well hopefully they get it

[richy]

got you. I should have read it as a broken record. It's deep with that in mind.

[Davidgeo]

It's okay but it's too short. Put some meat on that.

[Diamond Dunbar]

It's meant to be short and only give a glimpse to make the reader read it again and again until suddenly well hopefully they get it