I bet......

I bet......

A Poem by Diamond Dunbar

I bet they don't even know, how you really felt. I bet they don't even understand who you are now. I bet they wouldn't even recognize you through my eyes. I guess that's why the vision is mine to own. I bet you still pretending, I bet you still dreaming. I bet you still don't know what you want. I bet you still making excuses. I bet you know that you lost out. I bet you wishing you could pick up and call. I bet you still missing me when you didn't have to, you just chose to.

© 2016 Diamond Dunbar


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GAWD! I just went into a trance as I was reading this & I felt my life (especially the past 4 years or so) flashing in front of my mind's eye. It was like you knew exactly what to put next, in my vision of how this story goes. This is so powerful. I bet lots of different people could feel this way, too, & yet their stories would differ greatly. That's becuz your message transcends people's trappings. You've hammered out the basics that mess with all of us. Very excellent & deceivingly simple (that is, not simple to present this in such simplicity).

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 15, 2016
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Diamond Dunbar
Diamond Dunbar

Detroit, MI



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I have chosen to walk in my truth. My trials and errors are lessons for the blessings that awaits for me. more..

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