Darkness That I Will Leave Nameless

Poem...something I wrote listening to the band My Dying Bride...posted it on my Myspace page too...look me up

Days are nights anymore

With these demons that take my thoughts away

That take my mind's peaceful dreams

And murder them with the brightness of the day

Who are these ghosts that remind me

Of blood on oak floors and white walls

Who are these  creatures that call names

That I don't remember anymore

Who can show me my reflection?

Who can remind me of what was stolen from me

In ten years that leave me screaming on the floor

In flashes of memory that tear away at my flesh

To get to the core

to get to the places that I've guarded with ice and stone

To keep safe from a dark soul that has found them anyway

Leave me alone!!!

Let ME BE FREE OF YOU!

LET ME RUN TO PLACES YOU HAVEN'T SOILED

With dirty, blood soaked finger nails

I want to cut you

Like you ripped apart me

I want you to feel the fear and nightmare

That you raped into me

I want you to bow to me

Like you made me fall to my knees

You die at my hands

Even if I have to call on those demons to find you

There's no soul left in me

So it doesn't even matter

You took it all from me

You stole my laughter

And burned my most sacred forest.

Leaving me to shiver and cry in its ashes

I light my candles

And call moonlight to surround and fill me

Yet still you're there

I beg the sun to burn my flesh to the bone

And still your darkness lingers there

There's no escape from that which you did to me...

There's no erasing your infested stare

That wrecks my nightmares

I've finally started to remember

And I don't think I want to anymore....

 

Author's Note

this isn't one of my better...but its pretty heavy I think and I like it rather muchly.

Reviews

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I like this. It is dark and full of rage!! I felt the emotions as I read it. I liked how you set aprt lines 17 and 18. Very good!

[EliJoLee]

woww.
i can feel all the emotion and rage in this.
love the details/description.
very beautifully written.
hope u write more!
swell.

[Kae Martyndale]

I like it. It is indeed heavy, however you can definitely feel all the emotions. Good job!