No one will ever be more

In response to a poem "alone with everybody" by Bukowski. Don't laugh on my little bukowski trip, just read a book of his poems and really liked them...

 

 

I am alone with everybody too…

Searching for something deeper than

A warm body

 

I hate being just a body

To you,

To him,

To the one before him,

To the ambiguously gay man,

The fat man

The poet

 

Even

The man that told me

I was more

 

I never was

and never will be

More

 

No one will ever be more

Reviews

[Rees Thomas]

I like it because its honest, its the truth no bullshit. Nice work

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Wow... now that is deep stuff! I liked it so much. The meaning is superb. Thanks for sharing this!

[just is]

I like this, I found this sad really, i could feel the connection in this as cute as well, well presented write.

[Logan Carryall]

The depth you seek only lacks definition. But sad to say, we take a consensus.

[RAWR!]

haha,

i see your point, being objectified is just wrong,
but, you wrote about it in a funny way.
the
"To the ambiguously gay man,"
line was really a surprise.

[Hedra Helix]

strange that we're social creatures and mostly only moms with lots of kids feel like they're not alone when it all comes down to it. And I suppose even they do too in their inner selves. At least ya have fun;)