No one will ever be more
A Poem by
Amber Victoria Tudor
In response to a poem "alone with everybody" by Bukowski. Don't laugh on my little bukowski trip, just read a book of his poems and really liked them...
I am alone with everybody too…
Searching for something deeper than
A warm body
I hate being just a body
To you,
To him,
To the one before him,
To the ambiguously gay man,
The fat man
The poet
Even
The man that told me
I was more
I never was
and never will be
More
No one will ever be more
© 2008 Amber Victoria Tudor
Reviews
I like it because its honest, its the truth no bullshit. Nice work
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow... now that is deep stuff! I liked it so much. The meaning is superb. Thanks for sharing this!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Wow... now that is deep stuff! I liked it so much. The meaning is superb. Thanks for sharing this!
I like this, I found this sad really, i could feel the connection in this as cute as well, well presented write.
Posted 15 Years Ago
I like this, I found this sad really, i could feel the connection in this as cute as well, well presented write.
The depth you seek only lacks definition. But sad to say, we take a consensus.
Posted 16 Years Ago
The depth you seek only lacks definition. But sad to say, we take a consensus.
haha,
i see your point, being objectified is just wrong,
but, you wrote about it in a funny way.
the
"To the ambiguously gay man,"
line was really a surprise.
Posted 16 Years Ago
haha,
i see your point, being objectified is just wrong,
but, you wrote about it in a funny way.
the
"To the ambiguously gay man,"
line was really a surprise.
strange that we're social creatures and mostly only moms with lots of kids feel like they're not alone when it all comes down to it. And I suppose even they do too in their inner selves. At least ya have fun;)
Posted 16 Years Ago
strange that we're social creatures and mostly only moms with lots of kids feel like they're not alone when it all comes down to it. And I suppose even they do too in their inner selves. At least ya have fun;)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 2, 2008
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Amber Victoria Tudor Lake Forest, CA
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Aspiring writer, professor, championship poker player, world traveler, etc.
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