Poisen Air

Poisen Air

A Poem by TheDarkCryLove

I take a puff
Inhale dark grey
Soot into my lungs
Soothing and fresh
Poison air

Breathe out
A puff
A cloud of smoke appear
Intoxicating, invigorating
I couldn’t really care
What I thought of poison air

They say
It’s bad
You shouldn't smoke
It will kill you before your age
But so will tongue of wicked flair
If none of you beware

The poison air
You fear so much
To rot away your lungs
To me it is sincerity
For what I have become

My skin is grey
Like cloud of smoke
My heart is black as tar
My appearance is
A motorbike
And poison air from my engine

If we were talking chemicals
Humans would be a base
And cigarette would be the acid
But I, my friend
Am not like you.

Through years of torment
Grief and pain
My heart has rot away
I am not an alkali
Like so many who judge me
I am now an acid

So the poison air doesn't harm me

© 2012 TheDarkCryLove


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wow powerful deep write, nicely expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheDarkCryLove

12 Years Ago

thank you ^^
In a way... I kinda like this one :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 16, 2012
Last Updated on October 16, 2012
Tags: Smoking, Health, Lonelyness

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TheDarkCryLove
TheDarkCryLove

Cleator Moor, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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I am a man who loves many arts; Martial arts, Drawings, Poetry, novels, ect i am one who is hard to anger and i have been a pacafist for since 2009 I have my own website http://thedarkcrylove.weebly.. more..

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