Banshee cries

Banshee cries

A Poem by Katie Flores
"

people who make you feel like you are doing something wrong, and your not even sure why.

"
Do I now?
Am I "opposite" just to be "opposite"?

I am not sure I even know what you mean.

You two, 
You stand there giggling,
Laughing at my "despair"

But when will you realize,
I just don't really care.
about what you have to say,
about what you seem to think,
about what you care to do.

I'm just so f**king done with you.

© 2012 Katie Flores


Author's Note

Katie Flores
the beginning isn't really elaborated, and I realize that, but im not sure how to deal with that now, there will be a revision soon though, promise :)

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I really don't the think the beginning needs to be elaborated at all. This is elegantly and emotionally worded... I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I totally love it!! It's simple yet expresses so much. It's really good!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 15, 2012
Last Updated on September 10, 2012

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Katie Flores
Katie Flores

I see pine, not palm trees, i see forest and dirt, not sand and beaches, CA



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i am starting to find myself. for the longest time i thought i could only be one thing, but im starting to realize... i can't. And well there's not much else to say... I am a pretty plain person, a.. more..

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