A poem with a stranger.

death awaits lady fair.

You: hello

Stranger: hi

You: how's it going?

Stranger: not bad. you?

You: im a little chilly, but still sane, so its okay.

Stranger: I'm freezing, but my sanity is gone.

You: where has it fled?

Stranger: I know not.

You: will it take mine for companionship?

Stranger: How can anyone say no?

You: by the coldness of their hearts

Stranger: and the warmth of their desire

You: and the strength of their greed.

Stranger: there they stand yonder, feeling as love bleeds

You: and drips down their fingers, feeling alive as the warmth drains from their hand

You: s

Stranger: the scent of death then fills the air

You: and travels down the path, strangling the life away of a lady fair.

Stranger: farewell my noble girl farewell, it will be over soon

You: he said, as over her, death's flower blooms.

Stranger: from dawn to dusk the shadows loom

You: but from the bosom of coldness she does not wake

Stranger: her very soul it does now take

You: but even with this, Death's thirst refuses to to be slaked

Stranger: behold no shroud or slither of light, to avenge the dreadful sight

You: i personally believe this to be a fitting end. wonderful :D unless of course you have something else,if so i apologize for interrupting,my friend.

Stranger: much enjoyed

Author's Note

i was on omegle and came across this lovely person. i hope you like it, nothing is edited out or changed.

Reviews

[Sam Nona]

her very soul it does now take
but even with this, Death's thirst refuses to to be slaked

I really like these lines... they rhyme, but arn't over done.

[Catherine]

hmm.. crazy stuff. not everyone would be this cool.... but good poem!

[Mia]

My life will never be complete until I have a moment like that. This is too cool!

[Katie Flores]

ha I know. I completely stopped using omegle because I didn't want to tarnish this memory with the perverts you can come across... Im not pushing my luck any farther :)

[A Jainam Mehta]

interesting n different piece. I too use Omegle but never been so lucky to have a chat with such an interesting stranger.

[Lisa R Taylor, Author]

I did like it and the very fact that you saved it; intrigues me. Interesting entry, thank you.

[MoriartyMesa]

For me this sort of jump back and forth from Woody Allen in MANHATTAN, to something like Jack The Ripper. One of those cool things about this, it made me jump from one potential image to another as the words bounced off one another so well. Not sure if that was where you wanted this to go, but it moved so well.

[Katie Flores]

I always wondered, which am I Allen or Ripper. I could never reason it out by myself...

[murrill]

Very well written it took me back to a memory It reminded me of my childhood also reminded me of the people I met in life never to see again. I like it!

[GunMetal]

Way cool. It's awesome to find someone and spark spontaneous creativity.

[Tasha]

I like it, its very creative. Don't edit it I like it the way it is.

[Whiskurz]

Very creative....I like it.....Whisk