A Terrible Place

A Terrible Place

A Poem by TheBubbleManiac
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I don't know what to do anymore...

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I am in a dark place
Shaking in fear
I have let the world know something
A terrible secret no one should hear
This secret is of someone
That is held dearly to my heart
Now I do really fear
That they will rage with anger
My heart is racing 
I cannot focus on a single thing
I feel like I'm drowning
Sinking slowly to the ocean

Eyes slowly are closing
As the chaos slowly arrives
I cannot see anymore
Now I shall blindly wait
Never knowing what will happen
For now I shall lay here in fear

© 2016 TheBubbleManiac


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Wow! You have done a wonderful job in conveying the fear through your words.
I assume it is about a sitauion where a secret has slipped out of mouth and now you are ready to do anything to take those words back.

Posted 8 Years Ago


TheBubbleManiac

8 Years Ago

You are exactly right! Thanks for the review!

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TheBubbleManiac
TheBubbleManiac

Polkville, NC



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