A Long Time Ago

A Long Time Ago

A Poem by TheBubbleManiac
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Things can never last long...

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Always together
Our steps in sync
Hands intertwined as we walk
Smiles that were so radiant
Promises made with fake hopes

Telling each other false things
Saying we would always be together
But that was a lie
One that I had committed
Your smile was the last thing I saw

You didn't tell me of your sick heart
Pain consumed my heart
Emotions of unknown
My mind made you up

Truly you are not gone
Yes, you weren't sick
I shall go to our home
Surely I will see your lovely face

We shared so many dreams
I knew you would accomplish
That is why you are not gone

The engraved stone said differently
Falling to my knees I realize
It was such a long time ago

An empty memory
Something to be forgotten

© 2015 TheBubbleManiac


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Very good poem with a lot of emotion into it. You could really benefit from spacing this out though. Right now it is just one big clump and it is pretty hard on the eyes when one attempts to read it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


TheBubbleManiac

8 Years Ago

Yes I was strongly considering that! Thank you!

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Added on December 7, 2015
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TheBubbleManiac
TheBubbleManiac

Polkville, NC



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