A Part of Each Other

A Part of Each Other

A Poem by TheBubbleManiac
"

You may be different, but you have something to share with them...

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We may be 
World's apart
But we have
So much in
Common
You have my
Lovely locks
I have your
Height
We have a 
Radiant and
Rare smile
We share 
Emotions
With every
Step we take
We are in
Sync
Our voices are 
One
And we 
Share
The same 
Heart
We may not
Understand
Each other
But it's 
Okay
We don't 
Have to
One day
Though
Our World's will
Change
We will 
Reverse them

© 2015 TheBubbleManiac


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The flow of this piece is very nice. I really like the message we can take from it. Maybe if you broke it up a little, either creating stanzas or adding varying punctuation. I think that would really help pack a more powerful punch. I really enjoyed reading though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


TheBubbleManiac

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, and I believe you are right. I'll start trying that. Thanks again for reading!
potato

9 Years Ago

thanks for writing

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TheBubbleManiac
TheBubbleManiac

Polkville, NC



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