A World of the Mind

Alone she sat

Trying to get her

Attention somewhere else

But it was no use

She just couldn't

Alone she sat

Trying harder and

Harder

Then there she was

In a land unknown

Alone she stood

There in a wide

Open field

Her eyes shut tightly

A castle of her choice

Alone she stood

A village and

A knight

Someone to protect her

In the World in her

Mind

Reviews

[ExquisiteEyes]

I really liked it. It brings out our need to escape from the harsh reality.

[TheBubbleManiac]

Thank you very much. I think about going to another world myself sometimes, and so i thought of writing something.

[potato]

I enjoyed this very much. It can be easily related to, trying to forget about what was happening in our lives and just go some where all our own. Somewhere safe. Nice piece. Keep writing.

[TheBubbleManiac]

Thank you very much!

[Wild Spirit]

DO NOT DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!