X's and O's

just how i felt for her

From day one, I thaught about you happily

Now you're gone I'm begging God to bring you back to me

I need to hold you close to me, thats how it's supposed to be

I was never over you just like you wasn't over me

While you were on my mind like all day, I was just hoping you felt the same way

What can I say? Feelings for you here to stay

You braught me plenty sunshine apon the rainy days

I know baby, yes with a condom

I know you're not like the rest baby thats no problem

Thats no issue, I could never diss you

I'm wishing I was with you cause baby I really miss you

Really want to kiss you, I'm sure you'd say the same

All I need is you baby I don't need the fame

And I dont need the game, I think of you alot cause I enjoy you on my brain, kind of sounds insane

But I'm just crazy, felt this way since I made you my baby

My number one lady, but lately I been losing it

Been in and out the game but I ain't really choosing it

But for us I'm gone change, I'm true to this

My words real, no hollucinogens

And honestly you're astonishing

Don't want to be alone, choosing you over the rest

Thats why I'm wrighting about you reminding you are the best

And yet, I still can't stress my emotions

You're my love potion, personality cool

Game smoothe like lotion

I got love for you like water in the ocean

Maybe I'm crazy, or maybe I'm drove

If I ain't rich I'll buy your love with X's and O's

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

I enjoyed this and I love the words you used. Sweet and simple, complex at the same time. Thanks for sharing this with everyone :)

[koty bell]

absolutely awesome man sounded like lyrics great work

[Cassie Fraga]

can feel the emotion in here!! so sweeeeet.... very nice flow and play on words!!
**keep that ink flowin honey... Im diggin yo style**

[Roe]

i love the last line in this poem! its so sweet i love it

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I will buy your love with kisses and hugs.......excellent!

[Andrea]

Wow. that was incredible. Any girl would kill to have something that passionate written about her. Your words are so sweet and so heart filled. I just absolutely love this!!

[Maroon Surreal]

Ah! You know, you could be a lyricist! Wonderful and worth-reading. Emotional and passionate. Well done! :)

[Delicate Grace]

Ok, well first to review...that's cool and a little scary for me (I hate being first)...so here we go:

I like how it's written like you'd actually say it, though there are a few typos with spelling or whatever...the poem itself is really great. I was reading and had a beat playin' in my head the whole time.
I'm not like a "crazy listen to 'em all the time" kind of fan, so I could be wrong, but to me it's kinda got the same feel to me as Li' Wayne or Drake...or at least that's how it sounded in my head.
I am really in LOVE with the last line! Looking forward to reading more!
Grace