My Everything - Part 3

Baby you're my everything

Baby you're my all

Got me feeling like October, weak enough to fall

And when you're not around

You're always on my mind

Saying this is like having you sorting out my rhymes

Only to find out what no other girl could find

If it's complicated baby then just read between the lines

I'd give you eternity only if i had the time

Baby your love is burning me but sends chills up my spine

 

Reviews

[Who Cares]

Watch your capitalization, other than that it was great. Good job

[CatOfOrion]

Very good rhythm with this, definitely could make a great song with the right chords. Nicely done!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh the "chills up my spine" the way love is at times. You write this well with feeling.