My Everything - Part 2

Give her all the time

I dont even mind

This girl is it

Every bit of fine ...

Some days i just think of her

And other days shes all i need

Catch a breeze

Blow some trees

Day to day she's beautiful

What the rest of girls dream to be ...

Reviews

[Who Cares]

Capitalization errors, sweet and smooth flow and it sounds like a good song.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write from the mind of a admirer. I like the words used in this part:
"Catch a breeze
Blow some trees"

[Maroon Surreal]

Wow. I sense compliments. Really nice. But it's okay when you make it in smaller letters. Good job!

[Roe]

very lovely i enjoyed reading this very much!