My Everything - Part 1

jus the way one can fall for some one and share feelings for.

 

Baby you're the greatest, perhaps the best.

But i dont understand why im chasing the rest.

You're all I want and more, and all the rest are less.

It's been hard without you baby and i hate to see you stressed

I miss the way you smiled when we met and you were shy

I love the way you're eyes changed in the sunshine.

I love the way you smiled when I gazed into your eyes

You're more than I could ask for, you know its not a lie.

Time I just confess, cause baby i'm a flirt.

Nobody knows like you that i'm honest about my dirt.

It's not about the rest, just want to make it work.

When ever we're apart i miss you so much that it hurts.

 

Tell me that we're meant to be

Tell me that you love me

Tell me that you chierish and put no one else above me

Cause baby in the end i'm not playing games, and if you're feeling like this baby im feeling the same

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I agree that this is potential song lyrics :)
This is sweet and amazing. I love it! Great job.

[jennifer little]

nice and amazing work loved it and thanks for sharingthis with me

[Who Cares]

Capitalization errors, Nice rhyme scheme, and vivd imagery.

[CatOfOrion]

There was better imagery in this one, and it had a nice rhythm. Nice work!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I love the way your eyes changed in the sunshine, such a lovely line!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A nice feeling felt write, you pour great feelings into this. Each line is really nice. Enjoyed, I really like this.

[Maroon Surreal]

Hmm... would be good for song lyrics. Keep it up :)

[Roe]

very strong emotions in this write. i really love it!