Man v.s Self

Man v.s Self

A Poem by BluRaven aka Bootsy

Why do you have to make things so complicated?

Can't you see that  I'm worn.

Couldn't you pick a better time to argue?

Why do we have to be on and off like a light switch?

I dont believe you know what you want.

And I think you should take time, and get your self together.

 

Look, I'm done arguing, this doesnt make any sense.

I swear sometimes you make me just want to scream.

© 2012 BluRaven aka Bootsy


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The title fits well with this poem. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


inner voices are never good... **uuugghhh** the madness of it all, you did a great job expressing here. can really feel the intensity!! Thank you for sharing!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great concepts I like it, needs some revising though. Go back and re-read it, you should find your mistakes. I love the concept of Man Vs. Self.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 15, 2012
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BluRaven aka Bootsy
BluRaven aka Bootsy

dallas, TX



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Im Bootsy, im 18. Im a mix of punk, emo, hippie and hip hop. peole see im different and treat me different. I love screamo, and emo music, and stuff like pink floyd and jimmy hendrix. i love colors so.. more..

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