Grey eyes

Grey eyes

A Poem by BluRaven aka Bootsy
"

pian of memories

"

I saw her face, and remembered the pain.

I remember what i put myself through with her.

At a complete lost for words, i looked into those eyes.

The eyes stared directly back into mine, they peered through my soul.

They were just as deep of beauty as the day we met.

It was like falling in love, all over again.

But i knew she was no longer apart of my life.

Its been long enough ...

Ive been through enough ...

Oh the pain grey eyes symbolize.

© 2012 BluRaven aka Bootsy


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Oh how nice this is, I really enjoyed the lines in this especially these:
"The eyes stared directly back into mine, they peered through my soul.
They were just as deep of beauty as the day we met."

"Oh the pain grey eyes symbolize."

Corrections if you like:
loss
"At a complete lost for words"
a part
"But i knew she was no longer apart of my life."

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh how nice this is, I really enjoyed the lines in this especially these:
"The eyes stared directly back into mine, they peered through my soul.
They were just as deep of beauty as the day we met."

"Oh the pain grey eyes symbolize."

Corrections if you like:
loss
"At a complete lost for words"
a part
"But i knew she was no longer apart of my life."

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this, it was beautiful. I like these two lines: Its been long enough ...

Ive been through enough ...

but there were a few grammar mistakes, but I think you were just typing fast.
Beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Watch your capitalization errors, I love the poem though. You kept it simple but powerful. You make it easy to relate and everyone could.
"They peered through my soul", that line was beautiful, with intense imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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BluRaven aka Bootsy
BluRaven aka Bootsy

dallas, TX



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Im Bootsy, im 18. Im a mix of punk, emo, hippie and hip hop. peole see im different and treat me different. I love screamo, and emo music, and stuff like pink floyd and jimmy hendrix. i love colors so.. more..

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