Lifes changes, reality ranges

jus a piece of how i feel when im motivated

Chasing love, but finds pain.

On sunny days, i feel rain.

Runaway babe, escape whats afraid.

Lay on the bed of nails that i have made.

I know my fates not far away.

Destiny calls my name.... Goodbye

Til we meet again.

For my love it pains me deeply to face this.

 

No more running, from who i ... am

No more lying, to my self.

No more losing, no expectations.

Drowning pool of reputation.

I kiss the skies with no limitation ....

This lifes half empty, just an imitation.

Ill shut my eyes to taste it, better days, more to say.

 A reality in fantasy

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

dust yourself and try again.... hahaha!! this was a great write!! **tips my lyrical wand to you**
and the end packs this piece with a nice punch!! very well penned!!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the bits of rhyming in this. The feeling and the sort of dreamy sense in this is quite nicely done.
"Drowning pool of reputation.
I kiss the skies with no limitation ....
This lifes half empty, just an imitation.
Ill shut my eyes to taste it, better days, more to say.
A reality in fantasy"

[FumiTuki]

Very rhythmic and it possesses a very pleasant flow. :)

[Callum]

This is very good! You have written a true sense of what's real, to face yourself and not run away from who you are. Nicely done.

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It is always smart to stay strong and wise to stand up and dust yourself off. Keep motivated!

[Maroon Surreal]

Oh, that was really lovely.

"Chasing love, but finds pain.
On sunny days, i feel rain."
Really liked it.

Well done! :)