My Ukrainian Bride

Unpreparedness makes opportunity to pass us bye.

Your expositions
Are witty, such suppositions
Provoking love to abide
And I could nothing- to reside
Beneath your roof
So much coof
Had it not for this obstacle
An oracle
That I can't disservice.

Now love do reliquinshes
Company- so the hearth extinguishes
Our date
Now of late
Interests; the mavolents
Bereaved me. But I pray the benevolents
Grant me chance
To verse in this medium; since
We can't meet face to face my Ukrainian bride

Author's Note

Opportunities come to us at times but we seem to be unprepared.
Which often lead to disappointments.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is soo cute...i loved each word you used in this poetry and great work...

[Rubein Geterminah]

Thanks Wajiha.
I appreciate your beautiful review of my work.
I wish you a happy weekend and your families.
S.R.G

[pia]

This is so heart touching and well written
I love the words you have used here as well !! And i can relate to it regarding the theme
Sometimes opportunities are right there infront of our very eyes
But we cant grasp them due to circumstances and its one of the worst feeling ever
Really well written !!

[Rubein Geterminah]

Thanks Pai.
I appreciate your beautiful review.
It's true of what you said;
and this was my case.
So I found an outlet for my emotions. Hence, this poem came out of the soulish realm.
Hope we can be best ally on writercafe.
Wish you a happy weekend.
Remain bless.
S.R.G

[duff]

This totally caught my attention because I've walked in those shoes before. The times its happened are few but the opportunities were promised with excitement. The highs and lows are immediate and takes time to digest. Thought provoking stuff. Well done.

[Rubein Geterminah]

So true duff.
I had somuch excitements ...and we both did!! But our dream was not materialized.
So she quitted.
And nothing I could do but to write through verse.
I appreciate your beautiful review.
Happy weekend man.

[duff]

I can understand that my man. Writing is a great release. You are very welcome. Have an awesome weekend as well:)

[Rubein Geterminah]

Gratitude duff.
I appreciate so much.
And you do likewise
Your painstaking compositions in short poems call for suppression of your thoughts to suite the best subject .
Keep on

[duff]

Thank you Rubein. That's very kind of you to say.

[Rubein Geterminah]

The speaker unprivileged to meet his love one because of financial constraint; expresses his disappointment to his far away lover through this poem.