The Unsent Sonnet

The Unsent Sonnet

A Poem by DaveHRakkar
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A love long lost.

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Without your light, the world would be a canvas of gray,
A chilling void where warmth and joy fade away.
Your presence is a flame, igniting hope in the dark,
A guiding star that inspires, a vibrant, glowing spark.
In the shadows, you bring forth the dawn's gentle embrace,
And in your warmth, we find solace, a sacred, loving space.
Thank you for being you, a treasure so rare,
The world is infinitely brighter because you are there.

© 2025 DaveHRakkar


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Sad and retained along with memories that cry when nobody's looking. Your words capture a significant time in life and so well, not too many words but enough to write, read, regret but perhaps, remember a few moments of happiness you might never had. Better that than nothing.. perhaps.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Well done. Better than over 90% of what's posted here.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Added on March 16, 2025
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DaveHRakkar
DaveHRakkar

Canada



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Just a guy who has a lot of things to say about the things he’s gone through. more..

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