Forgiven

Forgiven

A Poem by TheArchAngel
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just a little poem

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Screams of agonizing pain; deafening to humanity.

Rationality seeping through their fabrics, thread by thread.

 A masochistic society, begging for forgiveness.

They plea with a sharp tongues; without remorse.

Expecting prosperous happiness.

Sadistic creatures influence humanity.

Taboos are the norm, in this vicious cycle.

Humanity begs to be forgiven

Their forgiveness is the pain they seek to relinquish. 

© 2012 TheArchAngel


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~ well... it's a lot more than "just a little poem"... it's extremely powerful and thought-provoking... i don't know if you meant to write about what i refer to as "the international conglomerate of cynics" who constantly abuse everything and everyone... but that's how i am interpreting this piece... they want forgiveness to remain in a state of rage... they're fascists in the guise of critics and seek our indulgence and forgiveness to get relief from the pain they inflict on themselves...

Posted 11 Years Ago


TheArchAngel

11 Years Ago

interpret it as you wish. every poem provokes different thought. Who am i to tell you what to think... read more
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11 Years Ago

~ ah... excellent... then, i shall stay with my interpretation and thank you for this powerful piece.. read more

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TheArchAngel
TheArchAngel

pinellas park, FL



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i was a man who became a poet. Poetry saved my life and i owe my life to her. I love poetry. i enjoy reading it as well. so dont be shy id love to read anything you have, ----- A few years ago i .. more..

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