Nothing

A poem about nothing.. Sort of

Emptiness

A void without end

It's impossible

No feeling

No substance

Anything and everything is gone

My family

My friends

My feelings

My possessions

My life

All of it is nothing now

Left to the void

Emptiness

Impossibility

In the end

Was everything I've done?

The people I met?

The places I visited?

The things I felt?

Was it all for nothing?

Author's Note

Same rules as always, I'd love to see what meaning you can get from it.

Reviews

[Leona Cieri]

Hmm, it short but sweet. The repetition helped with the feel of the piece; however, if you put a little more into it I believe it could be all the better. The reason being I feel it's missing something, but I'm not sure what. Almost liked it needed some slowing down to the last line, which is a good way to end, but it came too quickly. Perhaps some added words and lines as well as spacing would help. Otherwise, I really liked it ^^

[E]

Thanks for the comment, you ruined my hopes and dreams and will to live... I'm joking. Seriously though, thanks for the support, and I appreciate the criticism. I'll try to slow down on the endings in future work.

[Leona Cieri]

Haha, you're welcome~ I'm here to help, so I'm glad if I provided any good feedback