Positives and Negatives

Positives and Negatives

A Poem by E
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A poem about a problem life can give you.. See if you can guess what it is?

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Gone and done it again
Found something wonderful
But turned something wonderful
Into an object of fear

© 2013 E


Author's Note

E
Same rules apply as always, and if love to see if you can guess what the problem the poem represents is.

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Hi,
I really like this poem and I really admire the ending, a good finishing touch for a short poem. There's not really anything I can say about it, it's short and sweet and I really enjoyed reading it.
I'm going to take a stab at this guessing game; would the answer happen to be love or emotion? It seems to me as if love might be "something wonderful", but it could also be a burden.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

E

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it. And you're on the right track about the problem, love and emoti.. read more



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I like this, because it can have so many different meanings... I mean love is a pretty obvious one, but it could be about friendship, grieving over death, etc.

Posted 11 Years Ago


E

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, I like how you took a different approach on it. When you write something, yo.. read more
Michael

11 Years Ago

Yeah, I know what you mean. It's all based on how the readers interpret the poem.
Hi,
I really like this poem and I really admire the ending, a good finishing touch for a short poem. There's not really anything I can say about it, it's short and sweet and I really enjoyed reading it.
I'm going to take a stab at this guessing game; would the answer happen to be love or emotion? It seems to me as if love might be "something wonderful", but it could also be a burden.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

E

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it. And you're on the right track about the problem, love and emoti.. read more

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Added on July 30, 2013
Last Updated on July 30, 2013
Tags: Life, love, problems, adversary, fear

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