Under sheets of silhouettes

A luscious restraint to gaze

into her silk scintillations

an ashen wilderness

aroused in rippled serenades

delicate the neon reflections

ambiance of a dream’s allure

in ceaseless decadence

mesmerize my memory

life is a liquid illusion

submerse me in

wet writhing wonders

and your sublime sighs

an intimate innocence

under sheets of silhouettes,,,

Reviews

[Kelso A. Nicholson]

i love this! my favorite line is "in ceaseless decadence". Very beautifully written. You've captured passion very well.

[The 13th Eros]

I deeply appreciate your presence here, dear Kelsey. Looking forward to the wonders of your poetic words. xx

[Aramey]

There is powerful imagery in every line here. Wow! Especially noted was "rippled serenades," which didn't simply say song in any way, shape, or form. And "wet writhing wonders," another excellent example. This is a great example of paired and connected words that send shivers. Thank you for sharing this.

[The 13th Eros]

Precious Aramey, thank you for blessing my page with your presence. You are a wondrous writer and I have such respect for your gifts. xx

[Aramey]

The respect is mutual, I am honored.

[Muse]

Love the opening most..

A luscious restraint to gaze
into her silk scintillations

Admit it...you inspired the 50 Shades of Grey. SMIRK

[The 13th Eros]

Smiling.. Firstly, it is always bliss when your shadow falls on the skin of my page. Secondly, if I know you, you would inspire no less than 500 shades of blush, sweet poet... in every shade of the rainbow. ;)

[Muse]

lol..thank you.

[Hajar]

Wow , now I must say you impressed me , all the lines and rhymes are intelligent , I see a real construction and melody , I feel the beauty each should feel when reading poetry , even the title is totally appropriate , have you published anything yet?

[The 13th Eros]

I am truly grateful for your kindness and encouragement. I am mere shadow and am pleased more in your confessions than in my voice on a page. Poetry is breathing... breathe deep, precious Hajar. xo

[Kristallo]

Absolutely lovely. You have written this with a refined and elegant hand, it's delightfully sensual and so subtly so. Very nice write.

[The 13th Eros]

I thank you for caressing my page with your thoughts. I hope your day gives you deepest bliss. xo

[Charlène Boutin]

Inspiring, sexy, sublime. Thank you for your beautiful words.
I also want to thank you for inspiring me. Such exotic writing has opened me up to a world of possibilities for characters in my stories; I don't think I would dare to write certain things if I had not seen someone else do it before. Keep writing!

[The 13th Eros]

Precious Charlène, I deeply appreciate your comments and for sharing your writer's heart with me. You are extraordinary, and I am blessed to know you. Dare and dream endlessly, my friend. :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I agree with Angel...

This is my fave of yours that Ive read thus far, its like ... I dont know how to explain like I loved the way the words felt and sounded in my mouth like I could taste the passion, for lack of a better explanation it was a tongue-gasm

[The 13th Eros]

Your presence here is always pure delight, Samantha. Thank you for sharing your heart, and now a new exploration for me... the ever-infamous tongue-gasm! ;)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

hahaha

[Yellow Butterfly]

You've captivated my soul with your delectable words....

I do believe you have knocked me off my equilibrium... :O)

[The 13th Eros]

May you devour such sweet inspirations in this day. You have brought me joy, delectable poet. :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you.... so have your words kind poet :O)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is intoxicating... I love the liquescent dreams you have painted upon the silky sheets of my mind...a Sultry and alluring lullaby of words.
This is quite a vison... Heavenly write!

[The 13th Eros]

May the lullaby sing sweet to your beautiful soul when this mortal world tries to steal your bliss. Your presence here is purest joy to me. :)

[Androglossia]

Your choice of words used here displays a spectrum of colours that shimmers sensuousness. This is a very appealing write, Eros.

[The 13th Eros]

If it appeals to you, fairest poet, then it is worthy. You are exquisite in your eloquence. xo