An iPod Love Story: Part 1A Story by Jim ChaneyA 4 part short story I wrote using song titles from my iPod. Song titles highlighted in bold throughout the story. It was a ton of fun, and really brought out the imagination in me!“Where are you going?” He said, desperately hoping she would stay. “I don’t wanna be
in a relationship that isn’t going anywhere, that’s just hanginaround.” Adrienne
explained, trying not to breakdown.
“I got that job in “So this is how a heart breaks.” Josh thought to himself as she took one step closer to the door. Her eyes were blurry with tears as she asked one last time, “Would you go with me?” He felt the sharp hint of new tears as he tried to speak. The room seemed to have no air, making it harder to breathe. He wanted, more than words could say, to tell her the truth. But it was too late, she was already gone. He walked to the bathroom, put his hands on the sink and stared at the man in the mirror. A stranger stared back at him. He wished he could be the man he used to be; a man whose love for her was stronger than his desire to be rich, to be a billionaire. He laid down on his brass bed and for the first time, thought maybe this really was the end. As he closed his eyes, he remembered the first time he saw her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Standing outside a
broken telephone booth one Sunday
morning, she caught his eye. Like an invisible touch he felt overcome
by such a pretty young thing. She heard him stutter as he asked her for the time. There was a feeling; no, more
than a feeling, right away.
Josh’s ideas for the next big “money maker” were changing like the seasons, and slowly she grew sick and tired of always feeling forgotten. After 2 years of love and luck, she felt like they were at a crossroads, at the corner of the boulevard of broken dreams and Grey street, and he remained colorblind to her unhappiness. She’d tell him, “We have to fix this before we come undone.” He’d tell her, “Have a little faith.” But Adrienne had heard that so many times before, she was practically numb to it. All her frustrations, bottled up for so long, exploded one day like dynamite. She walked into his house, calm like a bomb, slamming doors and stomping up the stairs. Boom boom pow, the noise echoed from wall to wall. He assumed she simply had a bad day when he asked why she was crying. “How can you be like that?” she began. “Like you don’t see what’s wrong. It’s not just in my head, you know. I feel like I’m wasting my time trying to make this work with you.” “Hey, soul sister,” he started to speak, using the nickname he always called her when he wanted to make her smile. “It won’t be like this for long. Soon, we’ll be living the better life. I’ve gotta feeling this new project is going to be the one.” She sat there watching him speak, but had stopped
listening. He just didn’t get it. The damage
had been done; what she thought was unbreakable
had been broken. She spent the next four days trying to come up with the remedy for their problems but no
such answer surfaced. She couldn’t pretend any longer that everything was alright. A few months back, a company in ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Josh was awoken abruptly by the sounds of shattered glass from the building down on the corner. It was being demolished because the structure had been labeled as too dangerous and so workers had begun the destruction process. The sound served as a wake up call for his head which, in turn, talked his body into getting up. He walked to the window and looked down at the old warehouse turned nightclub. He recalled the many summer nights he and Adrienne spent there listening to cover bands butcher classics like Baba O’Riley and Bohemian Rhapsody. “Thanks for the memories.” He said to himself as he shook his head. He turned away from the window and like a switch suddenly being flipped, realized
he was making the mistake of a lifetime by
letting her leave. “I have to get her
back while I still got the time.” He
said to himself as he ran out of the house and into the first big yellow taxi he could find. “ The driver took all the backstreets
and arrived quickly at Adrienne’s house, but to Josh it felt like the longest time sitting helplessly in
the backseat. The cab pulled into the driveway and Josh ran to the door. He pounded on it, calling her name over and over again, but no
response. Hearing the commotion,
Adrienne’s neighbor Iris called to
Josh from her window. “She’s gone,” Iris yelled. “Movers just left a
few minutes ago; heard ‘em say she
caught the early flight this morning.
Sorry you missed her.” As she closed the window, Josh collapsed onto the
front stoop. His semi-charmed life was going
down in flames and his one chance to make it right was gone. He climbed back into the cab and sat in
silence as the car drove away. He
instructed the driver to drop him at the
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Added on September 7, 2011 Last Updated on September 7, 2011 AuthorJim ChaneyBaltimore, MDAboutI'm an about-to-turn-30 husband, father of two, and self-proclaimed wordslinger. I started a blog almost one year ago and have rekindled a passion for writing that I had forgotten was inside me. I b.. more..Writing
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