Catching A Gaze

......A distant rapture

"Catching a Gaze"

A gaze caught
As our eyes lock together
Only you hold the key
To its release or abduction
My thoughts abandon me
My breath pauses
Then escapes me
My eyes bound
And captive
My body's temperature
Sours on fire
When you catch my gaze
You're touching...
My soul

 

Katy Lynn

Reviews

[Michael X]

sweeping, enchantingly hypnotic in a sensually
seductive way of surrender, beautifully artful
eroticisms, capturing lovers gaze with tantalyzing
effect, katy, i really enjoyed the talent expressing
the essence of meaning, really nice, mike

[Sarakhan]

a lovely poem...very nice flow

[Morgan A Lynch]

when you catch my gaze youre touching.. my soul..
wow.. i love this one.. great flow.. gazing into someones eyes that you are in love with great.. love it

[Bullzie]

I like this piece a lot. It flows nicely and it has a warming feeling that you should feel when you lock eyes with that special someone.