Expressions

perception...

"Expressions"

Taking the words a language gave me
And with my mind
Command they begin dancing
As I choreograph their motion
Auditioning the vocabulary known
Casting only few
Performing only once
beauty only hearing
Inscribing my sole's impression
Lasting only...
Forever

 

Katy Lynn

Reviews

[J]

There's a peaceful brevity to this piece which I think encapsulates the art of writing to a lot of people. Cast only once like dice at a casino, only heard once at its crescendo, yet lasting forever it seems... or so you say. I can agree with that =)

On a nitpicky note, I think "improvisatorially" is a bit of a mouthful; chopping this out would tighten this piece considerably, but hey, that's just my opinion, nothing more.

Yes, I like the idea of dancing words... =)
J

[Evangela]

This is beautiful. I like the peaceful flow of the words. This piece brought a smile to my face, I really enjoyed reading it. My most favorite lines have to be the first three-brilliant! Great write Katy!

[Katie Lynn]

and you were wondering how to start on here, good place to start, though I'd say this is a mid point, because its relally good
~Katie Lynn S~