Not of this world

Not of this world

A Poem by The Raven King

 

 

"Are your arms strong enough to comfort me

Or your lips lush enough to feed me

Are your eyes deep enough to quench me

Or your voice enticing enough to drive the demons away

and shame the angels into submission"


Can you begin to understand the artists' mind?


The man that would remove an ear

write his words in his own blood

or swallow poison


An impossible breed

Impossible to understand

Impossible to help

Impossible to love

Aliens here


With unwritten ever changing rules

and hearts that begin in the pits of their souls

Their words are strange, mad ramblings


Oh!  to have someone really hear, to really see and feel,

to truly understand.

Though they may find love

They are always alone


Can you understand reading a heart

like a book

Hearing music complete and whole

and not being able to speak it except through

crude instruments

Seeing through the eye of a needle

the myriad spectrums of the world 

A thousand universes

a million worlds

trillions upon trillions of souls swirling

in one mind

all with a story to tell


Seeing so much, but never 

comfortable in their own skin

Seeing a stranger looking back at you in the mirror 

Strangers even to others of the same breed. 

For though they know their own 

Every insanity is as varied

as the swirls on their fingerprints

They only remind each other of just how strange

and different they are 


Inexplicable anomalies 

Forever lost

Forever alone

Dancing

on the outskirts

of humanity

forever. 


"Are your arms strong enough to comfort me

or your lips lush enough to feed me

Are your eyes deep enough to quench me

or your voice enticing enough to drive the demons away

and shame the angels into submission"


Can you begin to understand the artists' mind?

© 2009 The Raven King


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This poem is very deep and intense, and beautifully penned. Thank you for posting it...Hugz...Jillian

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow... this is a powerful statement of the artists mind.. and so true are your words. I can feel every word here. This sinks into me.

"Are your arms strong enough to comfort me
or your lips lush enough to feed me
Are your eyes deep enough to quench me
or your voice enticing enough to drive the demons away
and shame the angels into submission"

To touch a deep mind one must reach deep. Excellent write Raven


Posted 16 Years Ago


wow, so beautifully expressed. i love the line "are your eyes deep enough to quench me" takes a cliched line from a totally different angle and makes it really cool. your lack of punctuation is refreshing. i'm not sure, but this poem might benefit from being cut down a little, made a little denser and shorter, but either way it''s really well written

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

119 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 12, 2008
Last Updated on July 13, 2009

Author

The Raven King
The Raven King

AZ



About
"Call me vain and proud, the greatest sinner ever to walk God's earth, but Satan's boy I could never be. I haven't the humility." -Urbain Grandier, The Devils of Loudon I am older than I look by a.. more..

Writing
See See

A Poem by The Raven King