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I need you like the stars need ships to guide

Ever vigaliant in their duties; the stars stay true.

 

I need you like the evening dew needs the spring grass.

Asking ever so politly, if they could rest, for the night

 

I need you like the sun needs the shade.

Without who would she play hide and seek with?

 

I need you like a heart needs the soul.

and the soul needs its mate, because with out.

The world would lose its meaning.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

the imagery here is alive
Vincent

[Barry S. Maltese]

No one should ever need someone else to define who they are inside. We should give our own lives meaning and definition . . . . yet, we all look for that one person who completes us. Fills the voids that somehow fill our beings. There actually some who really find that person!
Nicely written, my son.

[Kyle]

So well expressed that one needs another and for more than just casual conversation. As far as i am concerned a warrior is in need of a true soul to hold and savor to justify life. Your words are well expressed and heartfelt.

[Michelle]

Beauty in each word.

Michelle