Ode To The .Org

Here is to "Charlie and Writers cafe .org

Alas my tears have drawn true blood.

 

The keyboard went flying  and broke with a thud

 

Yes its true my mouse has seen better days.

 

And speakers are broken in so many ways.

 

I cried i yelled, and cursed this damn .org

 

When all my writerings were erased when charlie went borg.

 

All that is past me. but the pain is not done.

 

But ill be here with my writing, because writing is fun.

Reviews

[Lucy Kennedy]

LOL!! Exactly my reaction when I realized what happened. lol. Nice piece.

[Mackenzie J. Burns]

Good one, I was so frustrated that I went five months before even logging on again to add some stuff.

[Maxinne Marie]

lol..nice use of rhyme..

[Sianna Reader]

Great job, it was pleasant and enjoyable.

I liked the ending, it rounded the poem up and made it feel lighter. :D xxxx