My Love

I'm taking this poem out for a test drive. Suggestions offered with a kind heart are always welcome

I love a woman who is kind.

She is slow to anger.

And lives life with loving empathy.

She knows right from wrong

And always does the right thing …

Just because it's the right thing.

I think that she’s beautiful,

But you might not.

And that’s okay with me.

Because her beauty is in my eyes

Her eyes are kind. Her hair glistens

In the golden light of dusk

And her smile comes easily ... and often.

Perhaps ... one day ... I'll meet her.

Reviews

[x]

And when he found her she was all home made bread and roses and music too. The perfect symphony of a woman that played the strings of his heart with her gentle loving touch.

Your write is the quintessence of what is important in life...the simple things, they mean the most. Thanks for putting that wonderful thought out there.

[Laura]

That is really sweet. I could picture this lady as I was reading the words. You did a really good job!

[Doreen]

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :) I like this. It could be taken different ways: either this is someone you already know from afar, or someone in the future that you have yet to come across. Very nicely done.

[Crinkle°]

very... poetic!

[Angel Veselinov]

Yeah :) I am starting to enjoy your poetry :P very good test drive if you ask me :) Thank you

[Monica S.]

The line "And lives life with loving empathy" is beautiful.

Great test drive for a poem.

[Seashell]

This is awesome.Short and to the point with a cry from the heart which always touches my soul.
Thanks for share

Babs xx

[Ladysue]

Aw this is very sweet...it is beautiful and endearing...nicely done...

[Candylove.]

This is sincerity down to the core, it's perfect. :)

[Lilly]

A beautiful and softly spoken poem of searching for love - the one you hope to find. Really lovely poem.